it is a nice composition, i think you might just want to refine your line work.
Well all my drawings are done on computer paper and scanned in. I don't have photoshop or anything to help smooth it out digitally.
I really like it, but i wish you had done more light balance. I mean she is way to bright compared to him. I'd like to see some more light on him to balance it out. You probably were trying to drag more attention to her upper body, but the male is lacking a light area.
This is called a "Study: :), which means I re-painted one of his original paintings, so im not going to change the values differently from his original :)
Also he is a lot more tanned than she is so he will be a lot darker in B&W value
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